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Alosa’s mission is finally complete. Not only has she recovered all three pieces of the map to a legendary hidden treasure, but the pirates who originally took her captive are now prisoners on her ship. Still unfairly attractive and unexpectedly loyal, first mate Riden is a constant distraction, but now he’s under her orders. And she takes great comfort in knowing that the villainous Vordan will soon be facing her father’s justice.
When Vordan exposes a secret her father has kept for years, Alosa and her crew find themselves in a deadly race with the feared Pirate King. Despite the danger, Alosa knows they will recover the treasure first . . . after all, she is the daughter of the Siren Queen.
Well that was certainly a splashy way to go out.
After a weird reread of the first book, I was a bit hesitant about going into this one. However, I had forgotten just how easy it was to get into Levenseller’s writing. I mean, dear gosh, her writing is just as easy to read as a sea breeze. I easily sat down and binge read it in 3 sittings, and the flow, the pacing, and everything was spot on. Even though I would get frustrated at parts, the book never faltered in the easy, breezy flow.
I think the biggest issue with the novel was the romance. The romance killed me – and not in the adorable, shippable way. For most of the novel, the angst level was permanently set on high. It was like someone just kept jiggling the novel on the handle of the stove and it was getting so hot that I just wanted out of this book kitchen. They were both making idiotic and frustrating choices, and I just couldn’t wrap my mind around it. In the first novel, Riden and Alosa were my OTP, and instead they turned into SMH. Just so many unnecessary bickering and stupid decisions and ridiculous choices. There were a few great moments, but I just got so frustrated.
Alosa and Riden themselves frustrated me as well individually. I felt like I lost a lot of who Riden was in the first novel. I couldn’t pinpoint him anymore, and I just understand his motivations and traits. Alosa herself – well, I loved her moments with her strength and ruthlessness and overall loyalty to those she loved. However, as I said, she made a lot of decisions the moment Riden appeared and at times, she was just a bit too cliche for me.
That being said, I absolutely enjoyed the secondary supporting cast. Levenseller made a dynamic and fun crew, and there were many characters that I enjoyed. I found there were many characters I would enjoy side stories of them, and I even had another ship that I was deeply rooting for??? I think they were super fun, and I just loved the crew so much. And trust me, this crew was just all epic female empowerment, and I was hereeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee for it.
I also was very interested in the plot. It had me investeddddddddddd. I had to know what was going to happen, and it just moved along from thing to thing. It had a pretty good pacing, and I like the things that Levenseller incorporated into the story. Um, the cannibal island was oddly one of my favorite events in the story??? It just felt like a cool addition to the story and like I was in a Pirates movie.

As I mentioned earlier, the female empowerment was crazy good. So many A++++ for Levenseller.
Overall, it was just an okay follow-up to the first book. I think it continued with a super intriguing plot along with the fantastic crew and easy writing. However, I did notice it being more cheesy/cliche and Riden/Alosa kind of killed me. It’s still a good campy series that does bring the fun. Plus female pirates are the best. 3 crowns and a Belle rating!
My feelings exactly! I feel like this could have just been a very epic female pirate novel and I would have been totally fine with that!
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Yessssssssssssssss. I super agree. I do feel like the romance could have been skipped and just focused on the epic pirate ladies.
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If I ever stop wanting epic pirate ladies then something has gone terribly wrong.
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Yessssssssssss. So very true.
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Haven’t read the books yet but i’ve been hearing lots of great things about it. I haven’t read any pirate novel before too. Awesome review! 😊
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Ooooh this would definitely be a good pirate novel to start with! It was one of my first few and it definitely got me hooked on them. Thanks so much! 🙂
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I totally agree about the side ship and losing Riden’s characterization. I really liked him in the first book so it was a little sad. Great review, as always!
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Yesssssssssssss. I was super confused on where his characterization went. He just felt so lame, and I was with you with loving him in the first book. And thanks, Kyera! ❤
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Thanks so much for the offer! I do appreciate it. However, I’m sadly quite booked up right now with review copies and real life stuff. Thank you for the offer, though! 🙂
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I’m always open to breezy prose and plots, but frustrating romances can usually kill a series on the spot for me, so I’ll be cautious going into this one. Very nice review! 🙂
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Yes! She really does make it so easy, breezy. The romance was so much cuter in the first book, and this one kind of floundered a bit. Maybe with some caution, it will be a better read with it. Thanks so much! ❤
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Fantastic review, Mandy! I definitely agree that Levenseller’s writing is excellent and that she does a superb job of capturing our attention with her characters and intriguing storyline. However, I do agree that Riden’s role was downplayed a fair share and his relationship with Alosa did reach cringey levels with all the angst and odd behavior between them. I think they’re a great couple but keeping them apart for most of the book was a bit of a waste. The female empowerment in this book is spot-on and the secondary characters were so interesting that I wouldn’t mind a few novellas focusing on one or two of them. And same, the cannibal section was the best event for me. Suuuuuuuuper thrilling LOL. Lovely review!
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Yessssssssssssss I agree so much, Azia!! I really didn’t get why Alosa and Riden had to be separated for most of the book when they clearly could have had some solid gold together. Instead we got the angst and oddness – and definitely the cringe. But I’m with you – I would love some novellas with some of these characters. And ahahaha YES. It really was! Glad I wasn’t the only one because I’m like, is it weird to say I love the cannibal section??? Thanks so much, Azia! ❤
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Yeah, it felt like a rookie technique to rely on romantic tension to add drama but the story could have been so much stronger with the two together much earlier on in the book. I would have considered them an OTP if that was how it went down lol. And nope! Cannibalism is always so exciting, isn’t it? My god that sounds bad XD But you know what I mean 😉
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I super agree! And yessssssssssss. I feel like if they just had been allowed to be together instead of the weird tension, OTP would have been great. AHAHAHAHA it really IS though. XD That’s the really bad part.
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I’m just scandalized because you didn’t use the AWESOME BANNER I MADE YOU. Also did you see what I did today DID YA DID YA
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Ahahhahahaha. I believe I answered this in the other comment. And lol post? XD Because if not, i didn’t see anything else because I’m curled in a ball.
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Curled? In a ball? Of joy, I hope.
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More liked ball of tiredness. Idk how to get myself out of it now.
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Gchat. Now.
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Again, I had to skim….but I did see that the romance killed you and you didn’t mean it in a good way. Oh dear!.
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Yes, I promise I’ll bring you a non-skimmable review. But yes! It was much better in the first one. 😦
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